To Jane in 2028
Hey! My dear old friend, how you have been?
Do you enjoy the life you are having? Are you still struggling those things that killing me right now?
Do you still want to stay alive? Could you tell me how to hold on in ten years?
After these years, I hope you found who you are, and keep the balance with the world and yourself, also learned to love yourself a little more.
If you found the answer, please write back to me, because I don’t think I could hold on any longer.
Love
Jane
Do you enjoy the life you are having? Are you still struggling those things that killing me right now?
Do you still want to stay alive? Could you tell me how to hold on in ten years?
After these years, I hope you found who you are, and keep the balance with the world and yourself, also learned to love yourself a little more.
If you found the answer, please write back to me, because I don’t think I could hold on any longer.
Love
Jane
I really like your sentence "If you found the answer, please write back to me, because I don’t think I could hold on any longer.", because I think I can feel it. It mey be better if you can change "with "into "between" in "keep the balance with the world and yourself"
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